Japan: First impressions, Kyoto, October 24, 1981
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Little old women walking pigeon-toed
In dark kimonos and haori coats
Mumbling to themselves.
Strolling along the narrow streets
Crowded with colourful shops
Purple and orange pickles spilling out into the traffic
Deisel buses roaring past
Motor-scooters, toy trucks and cars, bicycles.
Next a sweet shop with neatly arranged packages
Of pastel candies.
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Coffee shops, restaurants, all with wonderful plastic models
Of the ‘specialities’ they offer.
Tomatoed spaghetti cascades from a spoon,
Magically suspended in mid-air – the wonders of plastic
(I feel sure it’s all real food, sprayed with some clear preservative…).
Roadside temples adorned with flowers,
A cup of tea, some rice…
Or a new building, carefully constructed
Around some little family shrine or grave-markers.
Hordes of people – everywhere
School children, in navy uniforms at all times of day
Crowding onto buses, trooping through temples, museums, shops.
“Hello hello! Bye-bye, bye-bye!”
Children, like little mannequins
In brightly coloured skirts and tops
Centres of attention
Wherever they go.
Young women, impeccably dressed, the latest styles from Europe
Matching handbag and shoes, make-up and jewelry
Yet somehow a distinctly Japanese elegance and sophistication
Men all in suits, dress shirts and ties
Bowing to each other as they meet
Not quite obsequious, but only because they are Japanese.
The five o’clock throng – shoppers, cars, bicycles, buses,
Children, school children, tourists, old ladies, old men
Have the goods of the stores right out in the sidewalk
Jostling, scurrying, shuffling along
Packed into buses, squeezed into subways
The little old ladies scurry for the seats –
Everyone else, it seems, would rather stand,
Sardines in a can, than sit while they ride.
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Scattered liberally throughout the city
Bright orange Shinto shrines
Their gaudy splendour almost overpowering,
Especially on a sunny day…
The beautiful simplicity of wood and white-washed plaster
Twisted pines and soft green mosses
A quiet pool with brightly coloured carp,
Willows hanging over a stone bridge
Water lily, lotus, rustling bamboo.
Outside the frenzy of the city
The cars that don’t stop
The constant din of back-up beepers,
Road-crossing whistlers,
Bicycle bells, car horns, automatic warning buzzers
Tape-recorded messages
Ding-dong, ding-dong
Beep beep beep beep beep beep beepr
Clack clack clack clack clack clack
Shuffle shuffle shuffle shuffle
Creak…. Creak.
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Wooden sandals on pavement
The shuffle of ill-fitting slippers
Approaching on a polished wood floor
The slow creak of a sliding door
Opening…closing…
Shoes off, slippers on
Slippers off, socks on
Slippers on, slippers off,
Shoes on, slippers off…
Note: This post is exactly as I wrote it on October 24, 1981.




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